[skip changelog] Improve wording of docs introduction #1200
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The introductory sentence of the documentation homepage is the first thing the user may see when discovering Arduino CLI. For this reason, it's important for it to quickly and clearly convey what Arduino CLI is. Toward that goal, the following changes are made: - Use more understandable terms - Rearrange features list in the order of typical usage (install dependencies, compile, upload)
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The introductory sentence of the documentation homepage is the first thing the user may see when discovering Arduino
CLI. For this reason, it's important for it to quickly and clearly convey what Arduino CLI is. It's possible the current wording could be improved to do a better job of this.
The wording of the sentence is improved via the following changes:
titled accordingly?
No
I have changed the term "discovery" to "board detection". I feel that the meaning of "discovery" in this context is not widely known. The only uses of "discovery" in the documentation refer to library discovery, which is not the meaning of "discovery" in this sentence.
Credit for the suggested changes goes to @ubidefeo