Buku Ajar Bahasa Inggris 1
Buku Ajar Bahasa Inggris 1
INTRODUCING PERSONALITY
1. OBJECTIVES:
a) making introductions and greetings
b) making introductions to other people in accordance with communication etiquette
2. DISCUSSION:
When you are introduced to foreign friends, you should greet them with “ How do
you do?” and shake hands with them for a few seconds. The next thing is, perhaps, the
presenting of a business card, which is also called a name card. You should accept the
card with a smile and a quick browse, and at the same time, offer yours.
Steps for making introductions and greetings in English
Speaker A:
--- Hi ! (greeting)
My name is/ I am Mirna. ( presenting one’s name)
Nice to meet you. (showing willingness for the meeting)
Speaker B:
---Nice to meet you, too ! (responding with showing happiness)
My name is/ I am Linda. ( presenting one’s name )
Ways to greet each other
Good morning! (afternoon, evening)
How do you do? /How are you?
Good/Nice/Glad/Pleased to see/meet you!
What a pleasant surprise!
Haven’t seen you for some time.
Long time no see!
4. TASK
Practice greeting and introducing people
Imagine you are a clerk at a private/ public medical laboratory in Surabaya. Green
Swan is an expert Medical laboratorist from Australia. You are meeting her at the
airport. Act out this dialogue with your partner.
1. OBJECTIVES
a) Identifying parts of speech to several sentences.
b) Making grouping and identifying parts of speech to various sentences.
c) Improving grasp of grammar
2. DISCUSSION:
Parts of speech are sentence elements that work together to make up a sentence. Just as a
car is not a functioning car without all of its synchronized parts working together, a sentence
is not a functioning sentence without the correct usage and combination of its essential parts
of speech. The difference is that not all basic sentence parts—or parts of speech—have to be
included all of the time to actually make up a complete and functioning sentence, but its parts
do have to work together accurately for a writer to convey his or her intended ideas.
a. Nouns
b. Verbs
c. Pronouns
d. Adjectives
e. Adverbs
f. Conjunctions
g. Articles
h. Prepositions
i. Interjections
a. NOUN
A noun is a word describing who or what in a sentence—it can be a person, place or
thing. Remember, a “thing” can be anything—an animal, a device, a point, an object, an
event, and so on. A noun is usually an essential part of any basic sentence. It’s typically who
or what the sentence is about, but other nouns are often also included in longer or more
complex sentences.
b. PRONOUN
Pronouns can be used in place of nouns (when appropriate), and a pronoun operates
just like a noun in a sentence. It’s important to remember, however, to use pronouns
carefully. Often times, writers make the mistake of referring to a noun with a pronoun
3. EXAMPLE
1. TASK
Directions: Identify the underlined part of speech as a noun, pronoun, verb, adjective, article,
adverb, conjunction, preposition, or interjection.
1. English is my second language.
2. My father lives in Scarborough, Ontario.
3. After I got home yesterday, I took my dog for a walk.
4. The other day I saw a bear.
5. Although I am quite brave, that movie scared me.
6. I like hockey, but my brother likes basketball.
7. Toronto is the largest city in Ontario.
8. This is the ugliest fish in the lake!
9. My sister is a silly yet beautiful woman.
10. I love my pet lizard.
11. The stream bubbles merrily over tiny pebbles.
12. I work in Waterloo, yet live in Kitchener.
13. Driving in heavy traffic on King Street, I was horrified when my car stalled suddenly.
14. I laughed as I put the apples into a box.
15. "Oh! I didn't see you there!"
16. My brother owns two big turtles, and he keeps them in a glass aquarium.
17. My boyfriend has a tattoo; it is a red maple leaf.
18. I will be going to the Film Festival this weekend.
19. I wish I could be sitting on a beach right now!
20. The dictionary and the thesaurus are both valuable resources when writing an essay.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. Understanding sentence patterns
b. Identifying types of sentence
c. Improving writing sentence structure
2. DISCUSSION:
Sentence Construction
Basic sentence construction is something learned in beginning English language courses;
however, as life happens and time goes by, many of these first learned English fundamentals
begin to elude us. After a quick review, though, it usually all comes back, and good sentence
construction becomes a bit easier to put into practice on a daily basis.
What is a Sentence?
A basic sentence is a complete thought or idea—subject + predicate. It’s also known as a
simple sentence.
Subject (Noun Phrase) – One of two main parts of a sentence containing the subject noun
or a pronoun—a person, place or thing—often accompanied by modifiers. Therefore, the
noun or pronoun is who or what the sentence is about.
Predicate – One of two main parts of a sentence containing the verb, objects, or phrases
governed by the verb.
Sentence Building Blocks
1. A phrase is a cluster of connected words that do not form a complete idea or sentence.
2. A clause consists of a subject (noun/noun phrase) and a predicate (verb/verb phrase).
It can either be an independent clause (simple sentence), or it can be a dependent
clause that relies on an independent clause to form a complete sentence. (For more
information on dependent/independent clauses, see Sentence Expansion.)
3. Sentence Fragments. A fragment is a phrase or a dependent clause that is punctuated
as if it is a complete sentence, beginning with a capital letter and ending with a period.
A complete sentence must have a subject and a verb and express a complete thought.
A fragment is missing one or both of these. Fragments are not necessarily short. So
just because a group of words is long, do not assume that it is a complete sentence.
Make sure it has both a subject and a verb and expresses a complete thought.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. identify subject-verb agreement in sentences
b. apply subject-verb agreement in writing and speaking
c. analyze subject-verb agreement in implementation
2. DISCUSSION:
Agreement is a very important step in constructing a coherent sentence. There are three basic
agreements in a sentence: subject-verb agreement, tense agreement, and antecedent pronoun
agreement.
Verb: a word or group of words describing the action or the state of being of a subject
SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
1. If the subject is singular, the verb is singular; if the subject is plural, the verb is
plural➞Mrs.Hendrickson feeds the birds every day. Or: The Hendricksons feed the birds
every day.
2. Subjects joined by and are plural and receive a plural verb➞Jolie and Lara swim together
every Thursday.
3. Subjects joined by or or nor adopt the singularity or plurality of the last subject;
accordingly, the verb matches it➞Either that cat or those dogs have been eating my
snacks!
PRONOUN-ANTECEDENT AGREEMENT
1. Each, either, neither, anybody, anyone, everybody, everyone, no one, nobody, one,
somebody, and someone are singularpronouns and receive singular verbs.
2. Both, few, many, and several are plural pronouns and receive plural verbs.
3. All, any, most, none, and some can be singular or plural pronouns, depending on their
use. These pronounscan receive plural or singular verbs.
4. Do not be confused by words or phrases that follow a subject that are not the
subject➞One of the chairs sidamaged.His work, one of the many works exhibited
here today, is refreshingly naive.
TENSE AGREEMENT
Maintain one tense in a complete thought: pas tense or present tense.➞
Incorrect: In the game of hide and seek, Bobby chase Mary and tag her from behind.
3. TASK
For the following questions, choose the underlined part of the sentence that contains a
grammatical error. If there are no errors, choose answer (No error)
1. We knew Lawrence must of missed the appointment because train service was
disruptedforthree hours this morning. No error.
2. Every year, a few committed citizens exceeds our expectations and work tirelessly to
improve our community programs in significant ways. No error.
3. Each of the employees have had a half-hour evaluation meeting with his or her supervisor.
No error.
4. Here are one of the three keys you will need to unlock the office door tomorrow. No error.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. identify sentence complement in sentences
b. apply sentence complement in writing and speaking
c. analyze sentence complement in implementation
2. DISCUSSION:
A complement is a word or word group that completes the meaning of a verb. Every
sentence has a subject and a verb. Sometimes the subject and the verb can express a
complete thought all by themselves.
Recognize a subject complement when you see one. A subject complement is the adjective,
noun, or pronoun that follows a linking verb. The following verbs are true linking verbs: any
form of the verb be [am, is, are, was, were, has been, are being, might have been, etc.],
become, and seem. These true linking verbs are always linking verbs. Then you have a list of
verbs that can be linking or action: appear, feel, grow, look, prove, remain, smell, sound,
taste, and turn. If you can substitute any of the verbs on this second list with an equal sign [=]
and the sentence still makes sense, the verb is almost always linking.
Read these examples:
Brandon is a gifted athlete.
Brandon = subject; is = linking verb; athlete = noun as subject complement.
It was he who caught the winning touchdown Friday night.
It = subject; was = linking verb; he = pronoun as subject complement.
Brandon becomes embarrassed when people compliment his skill.
Brandon = subject; becomes = linking verb; embarrassed = adjective as subject complement.
Brandon's face will turn red.
Face = subject; will turn = linking verb; red = adjective as subject complement. [Will turn is
linking because if you substitute this verb with an equal sign, the sentence still makes sense.]
3. TASK
Exercise 1
Directions: In each of the following sentences, a verb is underlined. For each verb, decide
whether it is being
used in the sentence as a transitive verb, an intransitive verb, or a linking verb.
1. The author Erle Stanley Gardner wrote a number of books using the pen name A.A. Fair.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. identify moods and feeling in expression and dialogue
b. apply moods and feeling in writing and speaking
c. analyze moods and feeling usage in implementation
2. DISCUSSION:
COMMENTING ON SOMEONE’S APPARENT MOOD/ CONFIRMING COMMENTS
ABOUT YOUR
CONFIRMING
COMMENTING I (don’t) feel. . . (polite)
You’re (not) looking . . . ( informal) I ’m afraid I .. . (polite)
You (don’t) look . . . (polite) I ’m (not) feeling . . . (informal)
CONTRADICTING
No, not at all. . . (polite)
No, I feel. . . (polite)
On the contrary, ( I feel ) & (I’m)(rather formal)
I hear . .. Congratulations, (polite) Oh, what a pity! I ’d ’ve DONE . . . ifI ’d known.
Congratulations(aboutx/Doing...) Oh no ! I wish I ’d known I ’d ’ve DONE. . .
(direct) (strong)
AGREEING
Yes, it’s (awful, terrible), isn’t it?
Yes, it really is
Yes, quite
Yes, isn’t/wasn’t it (informal)
3. TASK
A. Complete the following dialogues with language from the Charts.
E X AM P L E
X : ‘My pet goldfish has just died !’
Y: _________________________________________________________
X : My pet goldfish has just died!
Y : Oh no! How awful!
Now do the same with the following:
a) X : Hello George, you don’t look too well!
Y : Yes___________a bit under the weather, actually.
b) X : __________ at work.
Y : Well no, actually, I ’m not getting on very well with the boss.
X: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
1. OBJECTIVES
a. identify plans and choice in expression and dialogue
b. apply plans and choice in writing and speaking
c. analyze plans and choice usage in implementation
2. DISCUSSION:
A. PLANS
EXTENDING INVITATION
1. Lets have an exhibition about old machines, you know industrial archaelogy.
2. We could do, Jim, but it would take a lot of work and there isn’t much Time.
3. How about showing how science has changed people’s live at home?
4. But wouldn’t it better if we made it more practical? Something like household gadgets
explained.
5. That sounds like good idea what do the rest of you think?
6. Yes it’s great idea.
7. yes fine
CHOICE AND PREFERENCE
OFFERING CHOICE
B. CHOICES
In a stationery shop
Formal Situations
Asking for preferences : Do you find … or …. More enjoyable?
The choice is yours; ….. or ……. ?
Which appeals more ……. or …….?
Showing preferences : I have a strong preference for ………
I generally find ….. more satisfactory.
I’d generally choose …… in preference to ………
3. TASK
1. ORAL PRACTICE
In a Hotel
Receptionist : Do you find an AC room or a Non AC morecomfortable, Ma’am?
Tourist : I’d rather have an AC room because theweather here is a bit hot.
Receptionist : Would you like a room with a bath?
Tourist : I’d prefer a shower to a bath if possible.
Receptionist : I can give you one with a shower, Ma’am.It’s room No. 210 for you in the first
floor.
Tourist : Thank you.
Receptionist : Welcome
TASK 2: Fill in the blanks according to your preference.
1) Would you like to wear a T-shirt or a safari while on a tour?
Ans: I’d rather wear a ………………..
2) Which do you prefer - coffee or tea?
Ans: I prefer …………………
3) Do you prefer teaching or practising law?
Ans: I’d rather be a ……………
4) Would you like lassi or orange juice?
Ans: I’d prefer ……………
5) Would you like to watch a horror film or a social play?
Ans: I’d love to watch ………
ACTIVITY: Pair work
1. OBJECTIVES
a. identify apologizing and complaining in expression and dialogue
b. apply apologizing and complaining in writing and speaking
c. analyze apologizing and complaining usage in implementation
2. DISCUSSION
APOLOGISING TO SOMEONE WHO KNOWS THE SITUATION
ADMITTING MISTAKES
I ’m (terribly/ very) sorry about this but I ’m afraid . . . (polite)
I ’m afraid I seem to have DONE . . . (tentative)
I ’m afraid I ’ve DONE . . . , I’m really sorry (strong) / sorry (informal)
DISAGREEING
AGREEING
Yes, it {can be/ is} a problem, {can’t it? isn’t it?} (polite)
I think I can understand how you feel, (tentative)
Yes, I know what you mean.(fairly strong)
CRITICISING
I’m beginning to get rather tired of { the way sentence/ X (DOING)}
Don’t you think (that) X tends to DO . . . (too much). ( tentative)
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trouble BAHASA
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that {he 1is always DOING / she never DOES } (direct) Page 33
I’m sick and tired of {the way sentence/ X DOING} (extremely strong)
MAKING /REJECTING /ACCEPTING /DELAYING COMPLAINTS
ACCEPTING APOLOGIES
That’s (quite) all right.
These things happen; it can’t be helped, (polite)
I quite understand. (Please don’t worry.) (slightly formal)
Not to worry, (informal)
MAKING A COMPLAINT
(Excuse me), I ’m afraid statement of problem * <polite>
(Excuse me), there {appears/ seems} to be something wrong with X. (tentative)
REJECTING A COMPLAINT
Well, I ’m afraid there {’s nothing/ isn’t much} we can do about it, actually, (polite)
ACCEPTING A COMPLAINT
Oh, I am sorry about that, I’ll DO (polite)
DELAYING A COMPLAINT
It suggests you leave it with us, and we’ll see what {can be done/ we can do} <polite>
I ’m afraid the manager isn’t in at the moment. Could you call back later? <Polite>
3. TASK
A. Make a short conversation for each of the following situations.
a) At a party, X spills wine over Y’s dress.
b) X arrives late for a meeting; the bus was late.
c) X has lost the record he borrowed from his friend.
d) At a party, X spills wine all over the Persian rug. X tells the host/hostess.
e) X is really unhappy about forgetting Y’s birthday.
f ) X rings up Y in the middle of the night because X is unhappy and wants sympathy.
g) X took Y’s coat by mistake: X rings Y.
h) X has upset Y’s mother: X tells Y.
1. OBJECTIVES
2. DISCUSSION
VERBS CONNECTED WITH BELIEFS AND OPINIONS.
You probably already know think and believe; here are more.
I'm convinced we've met before. [very strong feeling that you're right]
I've always held that compulsory education is a waste of time. [used for very firm beliefs;
maintain could be used here]
She maintains that we're related, but I'm not convinced. [insist on believing, often against the
evidence; hold could not be used here]
I feel she shouldn't be forced to do the job. [strong personal opinion]
I reckon they'll get married soon. [informal, usually an opinion about what is likely to happen
/ to be true]
I doubt we'll ever see total world peace. [don't believe]
I suspect a lot of people never even think about pollution when they're driving their own car.
[have a strong feeling about something negative]
PHRASES FOR EXPRESSING OPINION
In my view / in my opinion, we haven't made any progress.
She's made a big mistake, to my mind. [fairly informal]
If you ask me, he ought to change his job. [informal]
Note how point of view, is used in English:
From a teacher's point of view, the new examinations are a disaster. [how teachers see things,
or are affected]
PREPOSITIONS USED WITH BELIEF AND OPINION WORDS
Do you believe in God?
What are your views on divorce?
What do you think of the new boss? I'm in favour of long prison sentences.
Are you for or against long prison sentences? I have my doubts about this plan.
ASKING CLARIFICATION
GIVING CLARIFICATION
ATTACK RESPONSE
3. TASK
Make the following into questions and answers about opinions .
EXAMPLE
i) what/think/Fred’s new song ? What do you think of Fred’s new song ?
ii) it’s very good . . . in my opinion. In my opinion, it’s very good.
Now do the same with the following.
a) 1 how/feel/the proposed new art gallery?
2 it’s unnecessary . . . as far as I ’m concerned
b) 1 what/opinion/Carlos Begonyou’s new painting?
Change the following arguments about certain subjects into attack andresponse.
Example tourism
Attackresponse
Tourism benefits only the middle class Tourism provides jobs
x:isn’t it just possible that the tourist industry benefits only the middle classes?
y:i see your point, but surely you would admit that it provides jobsfor a lot o f people . . .
1. Boxing
A T TA C K RESPONSE
Boxing is inhuman. Boxing is exciting.
Boxers behave ridiculously. A good boxer uses a lot of skill.
Boxing is far too violent. There are strict rules to stop people getting
I t’s horrible to see people enjoying the badly hurt.
spectacle of boxers getting hurt. I t’s exciting to watch a good competition
of
strength and skill.
2. Space travel
AT T A C K RESPONSE
Space travel is a waste of money. Space travel teaches us a lot about the
The money could be used to help universe.
victims of starvation. Man needs to learn more about his
Space travel encourages international environment.
competition. We don’t learn anything It promotes international co-operation
important about our environment sometimes.
from space travel. We make a lot of technological discoveries.
• Developing countries need money • Rich countries should pay higher prices for
and food. the products of developing countries.
• The cost of technology and technical • Governments of developing countries
equipment should be reduced. should work together more and rely less on
• Financial aid should only be used for rich countries.
paying doctors and skilled people to • Only projects which cost very little money
train local people. should be started. Projects which depend
on a large work-force should be
• Oil prices should be increased by 5
encouraged to reduce unemployment.
%and the extra money used for
• At least 75% of money should be spent on
agricultural projects developing agriculture.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. to identify linking signals expressions in coversation
b. to improve speaking skill
c. to practice linking signals expression in conversation
2. DISCUSSION
CHANGING THE SUBJECT/REINFORCEMENT/ INTERRUPTING/BALANCING
ARGUMENTS
CHANGING TH E SUBJECT
By the way, talking of. . .(slightly informal)
Incidentally, on the subject of. . .(slightly formal)
REINFORCEMENT
What’s more,.. . Furthermore,. . Moreover,. . In addition,. . (slightly formal)
That’s not all,. . On top of that,. (informal)
IN T E R R U P T IO N
Excuse me, b u t . . .
(Could I) . . . Could I just (ask a question/say something ) here?<tentatif>
It I might just (Make a poin/ come in ) here <formal>
hey {hold/ hang} on (a momont)! < Informal>
B A L A N C IN G
(Yes, but) -on the other hand (polite)
there again (informal)
one shouldn’t
one mustn’t
forget that . . . (formal)
ILLUSTRATING
For example, For instance
3. TASK
Football, what do you think of Manchester United this season? . . . By theway -
By the way, talking of football, what do you think of Manchester United this season?
Now do the same with the following.
a) Charles, how is he? . . .By the way -
b) transport, what do you think of the new high-speed trains? . . .Incidentally -
c) novels, have you read the new one by Martha Colson? . . . Incidentally
d)children, how’s your nephew? . . . By the way
E X AM P L E
pets are a nuisance - pets are expensive moreover
Pets are a nuisance and moreover they’re expensive.
Now do the same with the following.
a) Cars should be bannedfrom cities→we should stop factoriespolluting the atmosphere fur
thermore
b ) Mr Smith’s very kind →Mr Smith’s got a realsense of humour on top of that
→ television encourages people to be Lay
c) There’s a lot of rubbishon television what ’s
more
d ) Smoking’s a waste of time→smoking also damagesyourhealththat ’s not alk
Complete the following dialogues using suitable language from the Charts.
a) Two colleagues are discussing some of their other colleagues.
X: .......anyway I saw Mr Brown this morning. He wasn’t very polite.
Y : (changing the subject)___________Mr Brown, how’s his secretary?
X : Mary, you mean ?
Y: Yes.
X : Well, she’s always getting to work late, and ___________she’s going out with Joe Green.
Mr Brown can’t stand him and . . .
Y : (interrupting)___________did you say she was going out with Joe Green? He’s a really
nasty piece of work.
a) Two friends are talking about the holidays they have had.
X : You went to Mexico, did you?
Y: Yes, it was really fascinating,___________the parts that haven’t been spoilt by tourism
were.
X : What do you mean exactly?
Y : Well,___________, there are incredible archaeological sites, and some really wonderful
country.
X : ____________you don’t like the holiday resorts and the beaches?
Y : That’s right,___________I like some of them, but not the really famous ones.
X : Personally, I prefer doing things,___________I love ski-ing.
Y : ___________________________you don’t like just sitting around ?
X : T h a t’s right.
b) A government minister is at a press conference talking about the problem of
unemployment.
Minister: The problem is caused by economic difficulty,___________by inflation. We’re
doing everything we can to lower the level of unemployment,___________we’re providing
incentives for businessmen in the north so that they will employ more men.
Reporter: ___________that the government can solve the problem.
Minister: Well, perhaps we can !
1. OBJECTIVES
a. to identify help expressions in coversation
b. to improve speaking skill
c. to practice help expression in conversation
2. DISCUSSION
ADVICE
ASKING FOR ADVICE
TAKING ADVICE
GIVING ADVICE
OFFERS
STATING A PROBLEM
REJECTING OFFERS OF
HELP/ WILLENGNESS TO
Informal
Kiki is exasperated as his scooter would not start. Ananda offers to help him.
Kiki : (Kicking his scooter) Oh, what a day! I’ve been kicking for five minutes. This scooter
wouldn’t start. Oh God, I’m tired.
Ananda : Hi Kaushik! Having trouble with the scooter? May I help you?
Kiki : How very kind of you, Anand! Please try your hand.
3. TASK
Make the following into sentences asking for and giving more exactinformation.
E X AM P L E
I think there’s a problem
I ’m sorry/explain/more detail
the situation is not straightforward . . . well, what I mean is
I’m sorry but could you possibly explain in a little more detail?
Below are some situations in which you are asking other people for advice.
Make the conversations that take place, paying particular attention to attitude.
a) The neighbours are always making a lot of noise. You ask a friend.
b) You always seem to feel overtired. You ask a doctor.
c) You want to give up smoking but cannot. You ask a doctor who seems to be in a bad
mood.
d) You are having problems with one of the subjects you are studying. You ask your teacher.
e) A colleague is making your life very difficult. You ask your boss.
f ) You keep oversleeping and getting to work late. You ask a colleague.
g) Your pet tiger has escaped. You ask a vet.
1. OBJECTIVES
a. to recognize parts of paragraph
b. to identify parts of paragraph
c. to prepare writing paragraph
d. to write paragraph
2. DISCUSSION
Paragraph is no easy task because there are four different kinds of paragraphs, each one
having a different purpose:
Introductory: Usually the fi rst paragraph in an essay, it gives the necessary background and
indicates the main idea, called the thesis.
Developmental: A unit of several sentences, it expands on an idea. This book features the
writing of developmental paragraphs.
Transitional: A very brief paragraph, it merely directs the reader from one point in the essay
to another.
Concluding: Usually the last paragraph in an essay, it makes the final comment on the topic.
The developmental paragraph contains three parts: the subject, the topic sentence, and the
support. The subject is what you will write about. It is likely to be broad and must be focused
or qualified for specifi c focus. The topic sentencecontains both the subject and the focus—
what you will do with the subject. It carries the central idea to which everything else in the
paragraph is subordinated. For example, the first sentence of this paragraph is a topic
sentence. Even when not stated, the topic sentence as an underlying idea unifies the
paragraph. The support is the evidence or reasoning by which a topic sentence is developed.
Itcomes in several basic patterns and serves any of the four forms of expression: narration,
description, exposition, and argumentation. These forms, which are usually combined in
writing, will be presented with both student and professional examples in the following
chapters. The developmental paragraph, therefore, is a group of sentences, each with the
function of supporting a controlling idea called the topic sentence.
The most important point about a developmental paragraph is that it should state an idea and
support it. The support, or development, can take several forms, all of which you already use.
It can do the following:
• Give an account (tell a story).
• Describe people, things, or events.
Pattern A Pattern B
TOPIC SENTENCE TOPIC SENTENCE
SUPPORT SUPPORT
SUPPORT SUPPORT
SUPPORT SUPPORT
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
Example of Pattern A:
PITY, ANGER, AND ACHIEVEMENT PERFORMANCE
It is generally thought that pity and sympathy are “good” emotions and that anger is a
“bad” emotion. However, attribution theorists have pointed out that the consequences of these
emotional expressions are complex. In one investigation,Graham (1984) gave subjects
(twelve-year-old children) false failure feedback during an achievement task. For some
children, this was accompanied by the remark: “I feel sorry for you” as well as body postures
and facial gestures that accompany sympathy (head down, hands folded, etc.). To other
students, the experimenter said: “I am angry with you.” Students receiving the pity feedback
tended to blame the failure on themselves (low ability) and their performance declined. On
the other hand, students receiving anger feedback attributed their failure to lack of effort and
their performance subsequently increased. This is not to advocate that sympathy is always
detrimental and anger always facilitative. Rather, the consequences of feedback depend on
how that feedback is construed and what it means to the recipient of the communication.
Other kinds of feedback, such as praise for success at an easy taskand excessive and
unsolicited helping, also tend to convey that the student is “unable” and therefore have some
negative consequences. (Seymour Feshbach and Bernard Weiner, from Personality)
Example of Pattern B:
PRIMITIVE METHODS OF LIE DETECTION
Throughout history there have been efforts to distinguish the guilty from the innocent
and to tell the liars from the truthful. For example, a method of lie detection practiced in Asia
involved giving those suspected of a crime a handful of raw rice to chew. After chewing for
bulldogs prance
sleepy hounds
boxers
Customers bring gifts
high- poodles
strung as Dogs
retrievers
easygoing
fussy Dobermans cockers
lovable
faithful
need demanding
watching
easy to
please
Organize Write a topic sentence or thesis; label the subject and the focus parts. The customers
in the beauty shop where I work remind me of types of dogs (of which I am fond).Write an
outline or an outline alternative. For reading-based writing, include references and short
quotations with page numbers as support in the outline.
I. Poodles (major support)
A. High-strung (minor support)