Editing Test1and2
Editing Test1and2
Identify the sentence skills mistakes at the underlined spots in the selection that follows. From the box
below, choose the letter that describes each mistake and write it in the space provided. Also correct the errors.
The same mistake may appear more than once.
One reason that I enjoy the commute to school is that the drive gives me uninterupted time to myself.
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The classes and socializing at college is great, and so is the time I spend with my family, but sometimes all this
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togetherness keeps you from being able to think. In fact, I look forward to the time I have alone it gives me a
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chance to plan what I'll accomplish in the days ahead. For example, one Tuesday afternoon my history
professor
announces that a rough outline for our semester report was due that Friday. Fortunatly, I had already done some
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reading, and I had checked my proposed topic with her the week before. Therefore, on the way home in the car
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that evening. I planned the entire history report in my mind. Then all I had to do when I got home was quickly
jot it down before I forgot it. When I handed the professor the outline at 8:30 Wednesday morning. She asked
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me "if I had stayed up all night working on it.
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1. 3. 5. 7. 9.
2. 4. 6. 8. 10.
EDITING TEST 2
Identify the sentence skills mistakes at the underlined spots in the selection that follows. From the box
below, choose the letter that describes each mistake and write it in the space provided below. Also correct the
errors. The same mistake may appear more than once.
In the unending war of people versus machines, a blow was striked by a man in pennsylvania who
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had a run-in with an automatic banking machine. At about ten o'clock one night, he approached the
machine to make a withdrawal. After he inserted his card the machine spat it back at him. The same thing
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happen a second time. He put his card in again, this time the machine kept the card. And did not give him
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the money he had requested. By now the customer was totally disgusted. Hitting the machine with all his
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strength, the card still did not come back. This was the last straw he grabbed a metal trash can and
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proceeded to beat up the machine. Unfortunately, the machine still had his card, and the man was later
arrested and charged with causing $2,500 worth of damage. He didn't mind. "I have been ripped off so