Descriptive Writing Structure
Descriptive Writing Structure
1. Setting:
2. Positioning:
3. Approaching:
1
Detail Enhancement: Emphasize how the closer proximity allows the observer to
notice finer details that might have been obscured from a distance (like intricate
patterns on a building's facade).
Sense of Smell: Introduce the sense of smell to the description. Mention any
scents or odors that become apparent as the observer gets closer to the object or
place.
Time Progression: If time is being used as the framework, mention how time has
moved forward since the initial positioning. Describe changes in lighting or other
appearances as the scene shifts (such as the onset of darkness or shifting
shadows).
4. Arriving:
Arriving: Describe the observer's full immersion into the scene. They have
reached their destination or are in close interaction with the objects described.
Inclusion in Scene: Explain how the observer becomes a part of the environment,
interacting with its elements or individuals. They are now in the midst of what
they were observing from a distance.
Sensory Richness: Dive deep into sensory details, particularly vision and sound.
Describe how things look, the sounds that can be heard, and any specific sights
that capture attention.
Touch and Taste: Introduce the senses of touch and taste, implying that the
observer can now physically engage with the environment. Mention tactile
experiences (like feeling the texture of objects) and any flavors that might be
present (like people eating).
Time Transition: If time is being used as the framework, describe the current time
in detail. Capture the atmosphere of the specific moment, such as describing the
night sky and the overall ambiance.
5. Leaving:
Leaving: Describe the observer's departure from the scene. They are moving away
from the environment they were immersed in, with or without a backward glance.
Departure Details: Highlight how the observer is leaving. They might leave things
as they found them, ensuring that the scene is not altered by their presence.
They may have replaced anything they disturbed in a room and closed the door so
that things are again as they were at the beginning.
Scene Emptying: Explain how the scene changes as people start to leave or go
about their own activities. The atmosphere might shift from bustling to quiet.
Final Glance: Mention whether the observer takes a last look at the scene they're
leaving behind. This can add a sense of closure and contemplation.
2
Time or Distance Reference: If time or distance was used as the framework, this is
the point to provide closure by referring back to it. This can give the reader a
sense of completion and continuity in the narrative.
Give plenty of concrete, sensory details (involving all the five senses) so that the reader
can visualize and understand each element of the description.
Give logical patterns to the details – important and broader details come before the
minor ones.
Set the tone of the descriptive piece at the start and then gradually build it into one
strong emotion.
Depending on the content and context, give different aspects of the details in different
paragraphs.
Give the details and then build the impressions around them.
Arouse the reader’s senses, capture the reader’s attention and retain it till the end.
----------------------------------------
3
**********