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The narrator wakes up from a nightmare about a terrifying experience they had five months ago. They went to the beach for a day out with friends Shashi and Florence. During their swim, the weather suddenly turned and a storm hit. The narrator's friends got caught in the rough waves and disappeared under water. The narrator panicked and screamed for their friends. They saw a wave throw Shashi and Florence back to the shore, both unconscious. The narrator pulled Shashi from the water and collapsed with their friends on the beach, relieved they all narrowly escaped.

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Write A Story Ending With

The narrator wakes up from a nightmare about a terrifying experience they had five months ago. They went to the beach for a day out with friends Shashi and Florence. During their swim, the weather suddenly turned and a storm hit. The narrator's friends got caught in the rough waves and disappeared under water. The narrator panicked and screamed for their friends. They saw a wave throw Shashi and Florence back to the shore, both unconscious. The narrator pulled Shashi from the water and collapsed with their friends on the beach, relieved they all narrowly escaped.

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Write a story ending with...... a narrow escape. I woke up drenched with sweat. I thought I had forgotten all about the terrifying experience I had. After all, it happened five months ago. It was a beautiful Sunday morning. My good friends, Shashi, Florence and I met at the bus station in the morning. Our destination- the Mersing beach. After days of cramming for the examinations, we needed time out. After strolling a short distance, we came to a small, rocky beach. The sea looked very clean. The air was salty and fresh. We sat at a seafront stall and had the most delicious nasi lemak and teh tarik. Next we decided to go for a swim. We walked further towards a rocky area as we wanted to have some privacy. We were very happy. We felt as free as a bird. The beach was surprisingly deserted. It seemed as though we were the first inhabitants on Earth. Florence made a cartwheel and Shashi and I ran about, yelling, This is sheer bliss! I then went about looking for sea shells to add to my collection. Shashi and Florence played by the waters edge. Hey! Dont go too far in. I shouted. Making face at me, they went further into the seas as they played jumping the waves. I could hear them laughing and shouting. Suddenly, I felt a big drop of rain on my cheek. And then another. I turned round to call my friends and saw that they seemed to be having trouble. The drizzle had become a downpour and the sea was a mass of angry surging waves. I began to panic. I screamed, Florence! Shashi! Where are you? Come back! They seemed to have been swallowed up by the roaring sea. I was petrified. Then, I saw a wave throw my friends on to the shore. My heart thundered as I ran towards them. I waded through the water to pull Shashi. She seemed to be unconscious. As I struggled with her, I signed with a relief to see Florence was ahead. We all collapsed on the beach in a heap in the rain. It was a narrow escape. Comments: Good introduction because it makes the reader want to go on reading There is a variety of sentence structures- simple mixed with compound and complex sentences. Vocabulary. A wide range of words used. Eg strolling instead of walking. Use of shouts, yell, scream to convey different meaning. Grammar; There is consistency in grammar. Spelling: Spelling is correct. Some direct speech is used to give variety. Conclusion; Answer to the question is short but effective.

Question: Write a story ending with We were never so frightened in our lives Steps: Understand the topic We were never so frightened in our lives More than one character A very terrifying experience/ incident

Introduction Who? Eg grandparents, five-year-old granddaughter When? After kindergarten Where? Shopping centre What? Going to food court for lunch. Body What was happening Problem 1 Grandfather was late in picking up granddaughter . She was very hungry- lunch hour shopping centre was crowded. Problem 2- Halfway up- little girl fell. How? Lost her balance. Problem 3 Grandfather standing behind her tried to prevent the fall.- lost his balance- rolled down the steps holding onto granddaughter grandmother screamed for help- someone to stop the escalator Conclusion- both victims sent to hospital- minor injuries to little girl Grandfather suffered head and arm injuries. we were never so frightened in our lives

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