Properties of A Well-Written Text
Properties of A Well-Written Text
Mechanics
01
Organization
Organization
Chronologically Spatially
Cause and
Topically
effect
Problem and
Solution
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Organization Organization
Although it is widely believed that Thomas Edison
Thomas Edison was simply the one who invented the light bulb, in reality he was simply the
created the first commercially viable light bulb. one who created the first commercially viable light
It is widely believed that he invented the light bulb. Along with his team, Edison improved the
bulb. What made Edison’s light bulb successful previous works of inventors who also worked on
was his use of carbonized bamboo as the the same project. Compared to previous versions,
filament. This made the bulb last longer and it what made his light bulb successful was his use of
was cheap enough to be available for the carbonized bamboo as the filament. This made the
masses. He only improved on previous works bulb last longer and it was cheap enough to be
of investors who also worked on the same available for the masses.
project.
02
Focus / Unity
focus/unity
Coherence / Cohesion
Coherence / cohesion
It enables the reader to follow the writer’s train of thought with ease.
It is achieved when ideas flow smoothly within and between
paragraphs.
It makes use of the right connectors to show relationships of ideas in
sentences, paragraphs, and themes.
cohesion
Language Use
They are cues that help the reader to interpret ideas a paper develops.
Transitional devices are words or phrases that help carry a thought from
one sentence to another, from one idea to another, or from one paragraph
to another.
They link sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are
no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas.
Time Sequence
immediately
first
afterward
before second
prior to
third
at the same time
after next
earlier
finally
simultaneously
during last
at last
finally
in the meantime
sooner or later
when
whenever
until
eventually
Addition Space
moreover above
furthermore next to
also below
another behind
not only beside
but also
additionally
as well as
Illustration Comparison
DON’T DO
Image is a very important factor in politics Image is a very important factor in
because once the reputation of a person is politics. Once the reputation of a person is
smeared by accusations, the people’s smeared by accusations, the people’s
perception of the person is forever tainted perception of the person is forever tainted.
and it may cause him to lose credibility The person may lose his credibility, even
and trust even when the truth behind when the allegations is not yet verified.
allegations is not yet verified.
Avoid redundancies, wordiness, clichés, and high falutin language.
DON’T DO
Although offsprings are taught not to Although children are taught not to take
obtain free gifts from strangers, at the gifts from strangers, many still do.
present moment many still do.
Avoid excessive use of “there” and “it” structures. These sentences can be
revised by dropping the “there” and “it” phrase and transforming the sentences
appropriately.
DON’T DO
There are many people walking on this Many people walk on this street during
street during Sundays. It is important to Sundays. Keeping your valuables close to
keep your valuables close to you. you is important.
Use precise vocabulary. Be accurate and condense lengthy phrases into fewer
words.
DON’T DO
Shafts that control the break during urgent Emergency levers are installed in every
situations are built inside MRT trains to MRT train for the safety of the passengers.
keep the passengers free from harm.
Be consistent with your pronoun’s point of view.
DON’T DO
We should accept that fate is simply an We should accept that fate is simply an
illusion; you must not leave our decisions illusion; we must not leave our decisions
to something that does not exist. to something that does not exist.
Avoid sexist language. This issue can be addressed by using articles (a, an, and
the), using plural nouns, using his or her instead of his, writing through a second
person point of view, or using gender-neutral nouns (e.g. chairperson instead of
chairman). Make sure not to overuse the his or her technique as it breaks up the
flow of your compositions.
DON’T DO
Every employee should submit his All employees should submit their
credentials. credentials.
Use the appropriate level of formality. The more formal texts use an academic
tone while the less formal ones use a personal or colloquial tone.
DON’T DO
Yes, diskettes are like things of the past, Diskettes may be outdates, but they are
but they’re still totally cool. still fascinating.
05
Mechanics
When we talk about mechanics, we refer to the conventions we follow
when it comes to capitalization, spelling, contractions, numbers and
numerals, punctuation marks, gerunds, abbreviation, participles, and
documentation among many others.
Pluto was demoted to a dwarf planet in 2006 after the General Assembly of the
IAU, as it only met 2 out of the association’s three requirements to qualify as a
Planet (Library of Congress). The dispute started when Caltech astronomy prof
Mike Brown discovered an Asteroid bigger than Pluto in 2005 (Cain, 2012). The
science community went wild! Brown’s findings sparked a debate on whether this
new planet, which he named eris, should be added to the roster of 9 Planets. The
controversy prompted the International Astronomical Union to meet up and
delineate what a ‘planet’ is. They came up with three requirements to classify a
celestial body as a planet and removed the Planet Status of Pluto based on the new
definition.
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Pluto was demoted to a dwarf planet in 2006 after the general assembly of the
International Astronomical Union (IAU), as it only met two out of the association’s
three requirements to qualify as a planet (Library of Congress). The dispute started
when Mike Brown, a professor of astronomy at the Californian Institute of
Technology (CalTech), discovered an asteroid bigger than Pluto in 2005 (Cain,
2012). Brown’s findings sparked a debate on whether this new planet, which he
named Eris, should be added to the roster of nine planets. The controversy
prompted the IAU to meet up and delineate what a ‘planet’ is. They came up with
three requirements to classify a celestial body as a planet and removed the planet
status of Pluto based on the new definition.
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