Determining Textual Evidences
Determining Textual Evidences
Textual Evidence
Determining
Textual Evidence
• You have previously learned that one can give his/ her
own assertions on what he/she has read. Such assertions
can be based on fact, convention, opinion or preference
and these assertions lead to formulating claims.
• As a critical reader, you should be able to recognize
and formulate counterclaims about what was read.
Counterclaims refer to claims that refute previous claim in
your readings. It is necessary to locate evidence provided
by the text to prove one’s counterclaim.
•To clarify one’s position on giving counterclaims, you also
learned how to formulate evaluative statements. Reading
texts should be examined carefully by identifying evidence
that support the author’s claim, finding evidence that
support the claim and evaluate if it is worthy for sharing.
•After learning these skills in formulating evaluative
statement, you must learn to determine textual evidence
to validate assertions and counterclaims made about a text
read.
•A. Try to guess Who am I using the given details.
People come and ask for my prescription. I use stethoscope to hear
heart beats and abnormal sound inside the body.
__________________________________________
•2. People call whenever their tires flattened. I check the radiator and
engine so they can travel safely.
_________________________________________
•3. I use harrow and tiller to cultivate the land. Many depend on me to
live a healthy life.
___________________________________________
B. Read the paragraph and answer the following
questions. You may write the answer on separate sheet.
Wooosh! The rain poured and the thunder struck. Luis stepped
inside the house with a smile on his face. He dropped his ball and
waltzed his feet towards his room and silently closed the door. His
mother followed him in the room and said, “You really love rainy
days huh?” He grinned wider and excitedly grabbed his gadget.
4. Why is Luis happy?
A. Because it was raining.
B. Because he didn’t really like to play ball outside.
C. Because he loved the crackling sound of thunder.
D. Because he had the chance to use and play with his gadget.
5. What phrase in the text gives you hint
that Luis is happy that it is raining?
A. thunder struck
B. silently closed the door
C. waltzed his feet towards his room
D. mother followed him in the room
•6. What do you think he is supposedly
planning to do if it didn’t rain?
A.He wants to go to school.
B. He wants to play basketball.
C. He wants to have picnic with his mother.
D. He wants to go to the mall with his friends.
•7. What line from the text support the idea
that he responded to his mother?
A. He grinned wider.
B. He dropped his ball.
C. He silently closed the door.
D. Luis step inside the house with a smile on
his face.
•8. What kind of boy was Luis?
A.He is patient.
B. He loves playing basketball.
C. He loves playing with his gadgets.
D. He wants to be alone most of the
time.
C. Read the poem, “Harlem” by Langston Hughes and answer
the following guide questions.
What happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up
Like a raisin in the sun? Or fester like a sore ----
And then run? Does it stink like rotten meat? Or crust and sugar
over—
like a syrupy sweet?
Maybe it just sags
like a heavy load.
Or does it explode?
(SOURCE:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/46548/harlem)
•Guide Questions:
•1. What does deferred mean?
•2. How was dream compared to a raisin? rotten meat? and heavy load?
•3. What are the author’s descriptions of a dream deferred?
•4. Based on the poem, what happens when you don’t go after your
dreams, and you defer them at a later time?
•5. If you were the author, how would you feel upon writing the poem?
•6. Do you agree with the author’s idea that a dream deferred stinks like
a rotten meat? Why?
•After answering the questions in the
previous activity, you are able to
identify words from the poem that
help you understand what the author
is trying to tell. The words and
phrases like deferred, fester like a
sore, stink like rotten meat, and sags
like heavy loads are examples of
textual evidence you can find in the
poem. These will help you formulate
your claim and counter claim about
the author’s tone and mood in
writing his poem.
•Textual evidence is
defined as the details
given by the author in
order to support his/her
claims. It reveals the
position of the writer
and makes the reading
more interesting.
Evidence are details
that strengthen, add
variety or weight to any
argument.
Let’s take this paragraph as a sample essay about the poem:
“Harlem”
by Langston Hughes
Gives me the feeling, or mood of anger and depression. It feels
like the idea of deferring dreams is hurtful and maybe even causes
one to become resentful before eventually being overcome by anger.
I know this because the poem uses the words “foster like a sore,”
which gives me a feeling of pain. Further, describing deferred dreams
as if they “stink like rotten meat” is an unpleasant image, giving me
the feeling of resentment. Finally, when the poem end with “Or does
it explode?” makes me think of a person who boils over in anger.
Here, the author claimed that the poem gives him the feeling of
anger and depression. He uses exact words from the poem like foster like
a sore, stink like rotten meat or does it explode which are directly
relevant to his idea of anger and depression. Thus, we can say that the
writer’s claim in this essay is valid and relevant.
In addition, finding textual evidence on a read text helps you make
inferences using concrete evidence on your claim. To support one’s claim,
you should explicitly cite the ideas that support your claim in your
writings.
There are different ways on how you can present textual evidence
in your writings. It can be through paraphrasing or restating the text in
your own words, through summarizing or stating in a shorter way the text
and other relevant details to support the idea, through referencing or
mentioning a specific section in the text and through quoting or directly
restating a part of the text.
•Remember that textual
evidence validates and
strengthens your writings,
showing that you read and
understand a text.
A.Express your claim or counterclaim on the following topics below
and explain your answers.
Four years ago, Emmanuel Cruz graduated from college with a degree in
Economics. Today, he works for a large software company. Now, at twenty-six,
he takes classes twice after work. He is learning to use computer program
Adobe Editor. He said he enjoyed college, but his job doesn’t use information
he learned when he was doing his degree. So, this second course helps him to
do his job much better and he plans to go back to schooling with MBA course.
Today, lifelong learning is becoming more common. People can return to
school regardless of age to get a higher degree such as masters or Doctor of
Philosophy. With many classes available through the internet, it is easier for
anyone to get higher degrees by distance learning.
12. What type of person is Emmanuel?
A. conscientious C. self-centered B. introvert D. studious
13. Emmanuel graduated from college when he was____.
A. 24 years old C. 26 years old B. 22 years old D. 20 years old
14. Why do people nowadays take more training courses or pursue
higher degree courses?
A. to become more intelligent B. to get higher salary C. to improve
their workplace skills D. to get ahead of the co-workers
15. He is learning computer program Adobe Editor because
__________
A. He enjoyed his college. B. It is part of his MBA course. C. He works
for a large software company. D. It helps him with his job.
Write a persuasive
paragraph on any topic that
interests you. You may
include either your
Additional assertion or a counterclaim
on your chosen topic and
Activities cite textual evidence to
support your opinion. The
rubric in the previous
activity may still be used for
this writing task.